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One Day by Obsidia Ft. CoMa
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I like the colors here, they are very light and almost angelic like, really gives off the feel of the whole crystal theme. I'm glad that I'm not looking at another head shot, must say, props to that as well.
I see you fixed the neck, however watch the collarbone and shoulders, I'd make them more straight and a bit more risen instead of a slope even despite the way that he stands. Such as, not making his arm look limp, but full. Look at a reference for male proportions, some people upload good sketches that may help you grasp the idea of the frame of a male's body. Keep in mind what I said last time about the eyes. There is the center of the face, and the forehead - that are two separate areas.
You are getting a lot better compared to the last critique that I wrote, there almost isn't anything I can say except to keep practicing, and I look forward to seeing more from you.
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